Hiding (A song by red)

[emoboi]

Ello PPlZ.

This is red. Yes I know me!!! Shocking. Anyway I wanted you to tell me what you thought of a song I wrote. Be truthfull if u care to leave a comment.

Hiding

You touch my lips agianst yours
You grab my hands and everyone stares
In the middle of your finest hour
You hold me close as if you care

One last chance
To steal my heart
One last Stance
To make your mark

Tell me are you truelly kind,
Or are you going to kill me one more time
Or will I truelly find
That you love me

Will you leave me helpless
Without breath
Or is this just another day in Darkness.
Without your love, your touch, or you voice.
Your the one who makes the choice.


One last chance
To steal my heart
One last Stance
To make your mark

Tell me are you truelly kind,
Or are you going to kill me one more time
Or will I truelly find
That you love me

Maybe you'll care
When tears begin to start
And you see me standing there
trying to fix my broken heart

One last chance
To steal my heart
One last Stance
To make your mark

Yet you dont make a move.

[xdude853x]

Splendid! *apluase!*

[quarterback11]

i like it